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Friday, November 2, 2007

censorship on myspace

Personally i believe myspace could be fun and interesting but in reality it dangerous. Having millions of people able to look at you could be life threatening. Anyone may find out all of your information and no on knows how it could be used against you. but on the bright side myspace is a place for friends. Ounce you get to know someone and talk to them they be come your best friend....trust is gained and they seem SO cool.....therefore you want to meet them...before it happens you find your self with a total stranger and a stranger could be a murdered or rapist. Having a censorship on myspace is very efficient and over time save many lives

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